In this excerpt from "Comanche Moon," the protagonist realizes that her hope of escaping by swimming is thwarted by the watchful Comanche warrior. His confidence in tracking her adds to her sense of helplessness, making the river appear as both a potential escape and a daunting obstacle. The internal conflict she experiences highlights her vulnerability as she weighs her options under the warrior's scrutinizing gaze.
As she glances back at him, she senses a blend of amusement and determination in his presence, which deepens her unease. The tension between them suggests that his thoughts are not easily decipherable, leaving her with a feeling of uncertainty. The encounter underscores the danger she faces, as well as her realization that her situation is more precarious than she initially believed.