I knot my fingers with Haley's and turn my head so I'm focusing out the driver's-side window--away from her. If I look at Haley, I'm terrified of what I might say, what I might feel. And fuck me, I've already said too much.
by Katie McGarry (0 Reviews)
In "Take Me On" by Katie McGarry, the narrative reveals an intimate moment between characters as one of them grapples with intense emotions. The protagonist intertwines fingers with Haley, creating a connection that is both comforting and alarming. Despite seeking closeness, there's a palpable fear of vulnerability and the potential consequences of revealing deeper feelings, which leads the protagonist to avoid eye contact.
This moment underscores the tension between the desire for connection and the fear of emotional exposure. The protagonist reflects on past interactions, feeling overwhelmed by their own words and the weight of unexpressed thoughts. This highlights the complexity of relationships, where love and fear often coexist, leaving characters in a state of uncertainty regarding their feelings and the future of their bond.
I knot my fingers with Haley's and turn my head so I'm focusing out the driver's-side window--away from her. If I look at Haley, I'm terrified of what I might say, what I might feel. And fuck me, I've already said too much.
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