Oh, poor baby, she said, mimicking his drawl.Whew. You're back. There was this other Susie here a minute ago, and she was really nice to me. She scared the shit out of me.She laughed. They locked her back up in the loony bin.Good, because there's only one Susie for me-the one who calls me on my crap and doesn't let me get away with jack shit. That's the Susie I need. That's the Susie I've missed coming home to over the last year. He kissed her. And that's the Susie who's going to leave a gaping hole in my heart and my life if she doesn't give me another chance.
In this excerpt from "Line of Scrimmage" by Marie Force, a character affectionately mocks another's speech while expressing relief at their return. They reminisce about a different person named Susie, who had been kind but also intimidating, leading to her being sent back to a mental institution. This humorous reflection highlights the deeper connection the character feels toward the Susie they truly appreciate.
This Susie represents a strong hold on the character's emotional landscape, as she challenges him and keeps him grounded. He acknowledges how much he values her presence and the void her absence creates in his life. The kiss signifies a longing for reconciliation and the hope that they can reconnect, emphasizing the weight of their relationship and the character's desire for another opportunity with her.
