Even as I hold youI think of you as someone gonefar, far away. Your eyes the colorof pennies in a bowl of dark honeybringing sweet light to someone elseyour black hair slipping through my fingersis the flash of your head goingaround a corneryour smile, breaking before me,the flippant last turnof a revolving door,emptying you out, changed,away from me
The excerpt reflects a deep sense of longing and emotional distance in a relationship. The speaker feels a profound connection with their loved one, yet simultaneously perceives them as distant, almost as if they are already gone. This juxtaposition highlights the pain of being together physically while feeling separated emotionally, emphasizing the fleeting nature of moments shared.
Imagery plays a crucial role in conveying these feelings, with descriptions of the loved one's features, such as their eyes and hair, evoking warmth and nostalgia. The metaphor of a revolving door illustrates the transformative effect of time on love and relationships, indicating that change is inevitable and that the person has been altered in ways that make them feel farther away, despite the proximity. The longing for the past and the recognition of change come together to create a poignant reflection on love and loss.
