Your book is bloated and self-indulgent
The book "Dark in Death" by J.D. Robb has received criticism for being overly lengthy and indulgent in its narrative style. Readers have pointed out that the content could have been more concise, suggesting that the author may have included superfluous details that detract from the overall impact of the story. This perception of bloat can lead to a less engaging reading experience, where the plot suffers due to excessive elaboration.
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